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Doom Breaker: August Launch Week Day 3




Blue-Deep's Doom breaker is a restart based story about one man vs the many monsters and demons about to attack in the future.


Doom Breaker begins when Zephyr's life is about to end. Humanity has completely fallen. Tartarus, God of Destruction, and Lord of Minions is about to kill Zephyr, the last soldier of humanity and eradicate all humans. Zephyr is the peak human of all humans, and still fails to the wrath of Tartarus.


Tartarus looks at Zephyr and makes offers him the chance to serve Tartarus beyond his world, "And conquer all... Even the home of the Gods." Zephyr tells Tartarus that it's not a bad offer, but knows his body is nearly destroyed, and that Tartarus just wants to see him pathetically beg for his life. Slowly dying, he remembers the women he loved saying he was too aggressive. The woman requested that Zephyr didn't swear and flip off too much. He refused the woman's request, so the woman put a spell on him.


Zephyr grabs onto Tartarus' hand explaining that the next time he flips someone off, a massive burst of power from another dimension will make him explode from the inside. He then says, "Screw you asshole," to Tartarus' request and flips off the God of destruction. The blast from inside Zephyr's body vaporizes Tartarus' arm, (and dignity) and kills Zephyr. Tartarus goes into a blind rage from losing his arm,


Zephyr believes he's supposed to be dead, but wakes up in a holy building with an elite angel named Mercedes giving him a mission. Several Gods have decided to send Zephyr back in time. He will be sent to the past with all of his memories intact, but his magic and physical, and experience skill s will not be restored. Zephyr asks why the gods are giving him a second chance. Mercedes reply is from the gods themselves, "We want to see something a little more entertaining."


The gods were impressed at his five year battle against the demon army and said that his struggle was worth watching. "Many gods were sad to see you being taken out of the world so soon. Remember when you seemed to get luckier as the end drew nearer? That was because the gods offered you their support in spite of the karmic price they had to pay."


Zephyr keeps getting angrier the longer the angel talks and asks if seeing him and everyone fight desperately to survive was just entertainment worth watching? Is that all humanity is good for, to entertain the gods? Mercedes drops a giant foot on zephyr to stop his outburst. To the angel, this just looks like a toddler throwing a tantrum. She explains that Zephyr was the only one the gods found entertaining. Zephyr proved that he's worth the gods time and energy.


Mercedes also tells him that Tartarus strongly insisted he be resurrected to remove that a mere human could hurt him. Tartarus' goal is to destroy as many worlds as he can, He had never been injured by anyone until Zephyr broke his perfect track record. Tartarus wants a rematch to restore his perfect score. Zephyr smiles at the fact that he has a chance to kill Tartarus again and accepts being sent back in time.


Zephyr is sent back in time before the demon war began. When he was just a simple slave who was made into a cave miner. He double checks what is stats and perks are away from the mining site giving him perks making him like an idle clicker who ascended their company. They gave him a nine perks to help him level up faster as long as he can use enough mana.


He can mine longer and faster than any other miners without feeling fatigued, see attacks slow enough to catch a whip in mid-air, and he can intake recovery items more effectively than anyone else, but in order to use all of the perks, he'll just need to increase his mana. he then starts explaining that most of the miners were taken in by the Temple of Aria be it people who lost their homes to monsters, or adventurers who couldn't pay enormous medical bills. Nobody is being saved, but they act like Aria will save them. Nobody can leave as long as they have the slave mark of the cross or else their heart will stop. Zephyr's first step is to pay off all of his debts to leave his slavery sentence behind.


A little boy has taken a liking to him since he must of stopped one team from ragging on him, and notices him trying to buy recovery water by putting a loan on the water and using it to increase his mana with the perk that maximizes all potions. Then, he remembers a location where a monster lived, and asks to work with a party of scouts to recon the cave.


A hunting team is prepared for the cave made up of had picked slaves with combat skills. before the mission, he tries to buy more recovery water, but the shopkeep tells him he already borrowed the maximum amount of his loan, so he decides to put an organ on the market to earn more money to buy recovery water. If he comes back with the money by the end of the week the church will not take operate and take his organs. He buys more recovery water to increase his mana before the expedition.


Gote, Dale and Marco meet up with Zephyr and head into the caverns to kill the beasts inside. They hand Zephyr all of their luggage making Zephyr a pack mule, and attempt to beat the dungeon before the attack squad. He remembers Gote from his past, and tries to give Gote credit with his party knowing that Dale and Marco will not survive. They all are asked to wear magic bracelets that detect if they're in danger showing some care for the slave hunters and begin to recon the caverns.


Zephyr made products for Gote to use and plagiarize from. Gote thinks that Zephyr will ask for any credit to rise up ranks, but will still deny him the credit. Gote also would prefer his party can conquer the cave without any external help from a strike unit to make himself look cooler. Dale recommends that they shouldn't take unnecessary risks which Gote says that he has a plan to beat the dungeon. He uses Zephyr's trap to attract the low level kobalds without realizing that an even bigger threat was also lured to their party.


A predator emerges in the cave after eating a meal of kobalds, grabs dale and sends him flying into a wall. Marcos, the tank/paladin, tries to block the next attack with a guard stance, only to be overpowered and sent flying as well. from the chapters I read I don't know if they're dead yet, so I won't elaborate on them. Zephyr grabs Gote's spear and begins to combat against the predator.


The Predator uses fear to stop Gote and Zephyr in their tracks, but Zephyr negates fear using dragon weed and maximizing his potion allowing him to fight against the beast. he then uses a poison an old friend named Fade gave him a recipe for when he was a soldier, and coats the spear in the poison stabbing and lethally destroying the predator from the insides until it perishes from the wounds. Now he just needs to wait out the poison or kill it instantly.


Zephyr chooses to try and kill the monster instantly by stabbing the spear into the predator's head. The predator retaliates by breaking the spear in half from the handle. Zephyr grabs the broken off piece and stabs that into the predator along with the knife Gote gave him and adds mana release to his fist to push the spear head even further into the predator's head and kill the beast. Gote, is both shocked and afraid when Zephyr says they need to talk.


Gote had just thought of him as the pack mule asking for a spot in the hunting team, but he never knew what kind of monster he would've recruited. I can't wait to learn more about Zephyr's past, and how he will overcome the demons in the future, but even these monsters are well explained by Zephyr and the fights are well drawn. I would like to see how he advances and becomes even stronger than the first time he fought Tartarus. This looks like a fantastic series to read, and I'll keep reading this.

 
 
 

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